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Post by jackfitz07 on Jul 10, 2009 16:46:31 GMT
Sorry everyone  I've actually gone off the idea of doing the War of The Worlds story, i think it would be too difficult to make the story enjoyable but I have remembered a story I did years in College, I set the story around where I live in a town called Leigh-On-Sea in Essex. In the story Edele is driving back from a local train station after getting the train back from London but as she's driving back to her house (Which is actually my house as it was the best place I could think of at the time) Her car skids on a large oil slick on the road & her car crashes into the path of an oncomin train (Empty train obviously) & both are blown up, later that evening Edele's life hangs in the balance at the local Hospital. I don't want to give too much away before I've finished the story, but I will say that Edele's life may soon be changed forever. |
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Post by The Animal on Jul 10, 2009 22:30:29 GMT
What, is she like the Bionic Woman or something? Because that would be kind of cool.
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Post by jackfitz07 on Jul 11, 2009 18:15:56 GMT
A little bit....I'm trying to make a decision on which story to do  Should I do the War of The Worlds story (I would do the story as I said orginally but Edele, Keavy, Lindsay & Naomi would be the ones trying to escape the invasion instead of being the invaders. or should I stick to the Gadget story I mentioned? Having thought about it since yesterday, the War of The Worlds would be more interesting to write & I already have a few different of the story that I just to finish up & I can post one when it's finished & ready to be viewed. www.youtube.com/watch?v=ThRYM7qpzooThe part in the original story when the Martians have captured people inside one of their machines, my Martian invasion story would have the same sort of story but in my version the Human-Female-Martian-Hybrids would feed their prisoners into their hearts & they would turned into fresh blood that would keep the invaders alive......Or so they might think......... A picture I edited ages ago to give some idea what the Human-Martian-Hybrid invaders would look like in my story.  I hope my story is OK when I upload it & that you'll like it img199.imageshack.us/img199/3753/oneoftheterrifyinghuman.jpgChanging subject, what would be a dream supercar for anyone here? (ie. Ferrari, Lamborghini, etc) |
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Post by The Animal on Jul 12, 2009 4:21:20 GMT
I've been trying to work on a graphic novel-type story featuring the girls for the past two years, but I haven't gotten past the opening page. Namely because I need a sample of Lindsay's handwriting (for authenticity), and that's a bit of an odd thing to ask for. And it's a b*tch to try to find it on the 'net (I know there was something at one time; I saw it, dagnabbit!). Especially, when a search turns up completely unrelated material. What the f--- does "Lindsay Armaou B-witched handwriting sample" have to do with Daddy-Daughter incest porn. What, I ask you. What?? And what are all of these d**n Japanese sites...? But, anyway...
It would say "Brakes. 12pm". Most of it would be covered, but still I'd like to know how she would write that. There's a point to it, I promise.
Back to your story, Jack, perhaps you could do a mix of both. Whatever you do, keep it as original as you can.
Okay. She kind of looks like she has baskets growing out of her shoulders. What exactly are you going for here? What are those things supposed to represent?
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Post by jackfitz07 on Jul 12, 2009 19:19:45 GMT
In my story they're meant to be half mechanical, but also half human & half Martian, so the baskets drop out of the shoulders which they then use to capture people so that they can be fed into their hearts (That's what that thing in the middle of her chest is supposed to be) they need the blood to live & function properly so when the prisoners are forced into their hearts it feeds on them & eventually turns them into fresh blood that the Martians live on, but the invasion doesn't quite work out like they planned, I won't say what happens, I'll leave it up to people to think about & see who works out what happens to them Anyway that's what the picture is meant to represent, the Martians preparing to capture people & begin the feeding process. |
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Post by The Animal on Jul 12, 2009 22:17:30 GMT
Okay, so if she captures people in her shoulder-baskets, does that mean that she's, like, a gi-normous, 50-foot-tall-robot-martian-woman or what?
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Post by jackfitz07 on Jul 13, 2009 10:14:11 GMT
Sort of but she's still half Human & half mechanical, half Martian so she's like a human machine, she's still sort of human like inside but she's mainly mechanical inside....And she would be more like 100-200ft tall & in the story when these enormous cylinders land on Earth on the first night of the invasion for days they just lie still, not moving, not making any sound or anything, then suddenly one day the first cylinder opens & people are curious to see what's inside of it, but when people got too close to it, a large cannon rises out of the top of the cylinder & it quickly destroys everything & engulfs everyone in flames. Then come the Martian Women (There would be thousands, maybe millions of them around the world) towering, terrfiying machine-like women unstoppable (When the Martians are ready to begin the inavsion one will emit a deafening howl (I'm trying to edit the B*Witched track 'We Four Girls' so that I've got a small clip of Edele's howl to use in the story, that's what gave me the inspiration for the Martian Howl in the story) Below is a picture of the Red Weed that would grow all over the world. img216.imageshack.us/img216/1953/redweedy.jpg |
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Post by The Animal on Jul 13, 2009 21:13:02 GMT
I'm actually quite interested to read this, Jack.
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I've actually gone off the idea of doing the War of The Worlds story, i think it would be too difficult to make the story enjoyable but I have remembered a story I did years in College, I set the story around where I live in a town called Leigh-On-Sea in Essex.
Should I do the War of The Worlds story (I would do the story as I said orginally but Edele, Keavy, Lindsay & Naomi would be the ones trying to escape the invasion instead of being the invaders. or should I stick to the Gadget story I mentioned? Having thought about it since yesterday, the War of The Worlds would be more interesting to write & I already have a few different of the story that I just to finish up & I can post one when it's finished & ready to be viewed.
I hope my story is OK when I upload it & that you'll like it