Robin Morbid
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Post by Robin Morbid on Jul 6, 2011 21:13:33 GMT
Not having a job on the coast I'm on...
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Post by The Animal on Jul 20, 2011 0:44:35 GMT
I bought the chicken patties, okay? Don't be gettin' all on me about not putting them in the oven yet. Yo' legs ain't broke. You lucky I'm even lettin' you eat my chicken patties.
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Post by Robin Morbid on Jul 20, 2011 1:09:32 GMT
gosh I'm sorry! I have a splint in my left leg,walking hurts because I'm stupid and push myself too hard!!! and chicken patties scare me until they're in an oven!
but for real...splint in my leg,hurts like crazy so now I can't work out the way I want to.
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Post by Wolf on Jul 20, 2011 1:15:46 GMT
Does hot ass weather count as an annoyance? I'm tired of it being so f***ing hot outside you can't doing anything until the evening, even then it doesn't feel cool enough to mow the lawn  |
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Post by The Animal on Jul 20, 2011 20:41:08 GMT
Haha. Thanks for the laugh, Annie. My mother and I had a little spat yesterday because I hadn't started supper yet. Sorry about your leg. Take it easy.
I'm not annoyed today, yet.
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Post by Robin Morbid on Jul 20, 2011 21:32:23 GMT
My friend is having me read her fanfiction...I'm not a fan of them even though I've written a few in my time....but the thing with this is she wants me to read it/edit it/give her constructive criticism but when I do she gets nine kinds of upset.
Strike one: No conflict,if you're going to write a story,it needs to be interesting this is what CONFLICT IS FOR!!!!! ......
Strike two: Beating a dead horse with dialogue....you don't need to beat a point of the story to death to make people understand it. The characters get together,you can see that clearly in the dialogue,but then she proceeds to say things like "referring to her girlfriend,YES GIRLFRIEND!!!!" and "something something blah blah girlfriend,its so funly fantastic to say she's my girlfriend..." we get it..they're dating.
Strike three: The most annoying part is the use of pet names as if they are real names...darling there are only two people conversing in this chapter,we know who is talk to who you don't have to end every sentence and statement with the word "love."
ex: "Hey,love" "What do you need,love?" "Love,this is how one would stick a fork in their eye,love,"
It would be cute if it weren't every other line said out of the characters mouth.
This is the most annoying story I have ever read,but I made a promise and plan to keep it and stick this crap through...
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Post by Meli on Jul 21, 2011 1:01:08 GMT
Hope the leg gets better, Annie.
Bring some of that "hot ass" weather this way, Kat.
Don't panic, Erin, I'd have been patient enough to wait for the chicken...
So, you're saying, Annie, I'd do a better job?
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Post by Wolf on Jul 21, 2011 1:07:48 GMT
The heat index has been close to 115ºF here, Meli...sure you want this heat?
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Post by Meli on Jul 21, 2011 5:37:22 GMT
If you're sure you want the cold, and the rrain, and the cold and flu crap from here...
By the way, what is that in Celsius?
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Post by Robin Morbid on Jul 21, 2011 6:26:22 GMT
Meli,any of us could come up with something better than this chick. Plus you have done better.
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Post by Wolf on Jul 21, 2011 17:53:54 GMT
By the way, what is that in Celsius? 115ºF (46º C) |
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Post by Robin Morbid on Jul 21, 2011 23:32:58 GMT
when shaun runs off with the remote and hides it in the yard....
also,googly eyes that don't googly...
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Post by Wolf on Jul 22, 2011 2:05:52 GMT
The fact that someone broke into my cousins house and stole a bunch of their stuff, this was done by her daughter's ex-boyfriend...stuff like TVs, Sound systems, speakers, front loading washer and dryer, Dvd's, The xbox, PS3 and the games, I know the guy too, he was here with my cousin and her daughter, I also went to school with him
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Post by Robin Morbid on Jul 22, 2011 8:07:26 GMT
break outs on my face...and stress eating...quite annoying
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Post by Wolf on Jul 23, 2011 1:20:48 GMT
Trains...Stupid train was parked in the middle of the d*** tracks when we got to Madison, IL today! It was too d*** hot to be sitting there for 40 mins waits for a f***ing train to move its metal a**! ARGH! |
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